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You could make something great one day

Looking at all your submitted animations a few things are clear:
a)Your a great artist, with great vision and an eye of cinematic effect
b)Your animation skills at the moment show inexperience
c)your keen on Sonic Team characters!

The best thing for you to do, is to watch as much web animation as possible and have a look at how other animators pull things off and also heres a tip from me - up frame rate to about 28-30 frames per second, I'll leave you to figure out why. Despite this your work is pretty good for someone who has jsut started using flash!

ElsonWong-Darkspeeds responds:

Thank you PencilSketch for your positive and constructive feedback. I really appreciate your time writing something that helps me in the long-run.

I should check you out next time. *thumbs up*

I will take into consideration of your suggestions. I'm most intrigued to discover the benefits of having 28-30 fps on flash. It's obvious that the more fps the better the quality but you gotta take into consideration of the time costs as well.

So once again thank you for sharing me you insight.

Your sound effects were so funny

'what the-' I loved that, and the explosion sounds. HAAHAHA! That was a good flash, nice work.

RWS responds:

thanks, people say im the next micheal winslow, but i just tell them he's way better then me. But I know they're right :P

That was big!

Don't listen to HollywoodSound that was a great flash. It was funny, it didnt have mindless violence. Well drawn, good sound and music. That was good job. Nice flash. I hope to see more of Captain Sprago!

Anax responds:

yeaaaaaaaaaaahhh!! thanks dude!!

When you said you made it in a day...

I thought it was a blam point for me. I was wrong. I think what you meant is collectively that took you 24 hours. Prety good.

ChupChup responds:

heh thx ^^

Wow

That was an amzing first flash. I think I've heard that song somewhere before...Toshiro Masuda?

immortaltechnique responds:

YES!! .. haha naruto owns!! ... and thank u U OWN for giving me a 9 lol
take it ez

Your lieing

That did not take one year? Did you script the whole thing or something? It was a well animated flash but it was only about 10 seconds. At most thats a few weeks work, not a year. Still it was a nice looking flash.

Poison-Rat responds:

I drew it all with my ear

That looked like a tamagotchi

That was some nice animation. What was that rounds ball thing anyway.

Jayarr responds:

tamagotchi..jesus you brought it back a few years..it does look like a tamagatchi....i used to have one..thats really sad. sometimes i forgot to turn off the sound..and it would beep "im hungry" in class. jesus whats wrong with me?

That just wasnt funny

It wasnt funny

Molzahn responds:

Well that is just bland and straight forward. You couldnt make atleast a funny review? Come on!

I couldnt keep up!

The fighting was beatiful; i couldnt keep up becasue it was so fast and fluid, it was like watching a Bruce Lee Film. The graphics were detailed and it all came together nicely. Thats the best sprite animation I've seen, I salute you.

keyweez360 responds:

thank you. :)

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